雅思真题及高分范文

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雅思作文高分范文(篇一)

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success,others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.
Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. However, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge. A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.
Of course, factors such as loving relationship, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.
Overall, I think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and what is not (a problem at work,getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.).
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.
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雅思作文高分范文(篇二)

1. 堆集写作辞汇
所以这里我说的堆集写作辞汇并不是让列位去可以去决心去堆集高级辞汇，而是堆集一些自己可以在写作里可是自己那时没有想到的词，大概想到了可是不会写的词
随意举个例子，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 ：
我相信大师都晓得，高文文第一段可以写成引入题目布景（改写）+表述自己概念
接下来一路来看看范文中的在第一段的第一句是若何引入题目布景的这句话的
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.
这句话说的：是孩子们在很小的时辰就领会是非的区分是很重要的。
范文第一段第一句：One important stage in a child's growth is certainly the development of a conscience,which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong.
这句话说的是孩子成长的一个重要阶段固然是良知的发育，这与分辨是非的才能有关。
大师再留意到我标注的-conscience良知，跟stage阶段
引入题目标布景的时辰，把句子全部同义替换是很low的，范文里面就把区分是非对错可以了解成跟良知的功用有关；小的时辰简直就是我们人生中的某个阶段，这样一换，引入题目布景就很自然的同时，还表现了你对题目布景的公道延长。
所以写作中辞汇并不是越高级越好，而是需要你得当表达意义的时辰有得当的辞汇停止表达，能做到就很利害了，像范文中这些自己没想到用大概想到了不会写的辞汇难道不值得你堆集下来吗。
2. 堆集好用的句型
这里我说的堆集好用句型，并不是指非要列位通篇都能做到长难句，而是得当的意义用得当的句子停止表达就行了
比如，剑10 Test 1 WRITING TASK 2 范文中的这句话（题目还是上面）
To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish,as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.
赏罚一个年龄小的孩子是毛病又愚蠢的，由于婴儿不明鹤发生了什么或为什么要赏罚他或她。
这个句子是由主句+缘由状语从句组成，说了然赏罚小孩是毛病又愚蠢的缘由，因果关系显得有理有据。
那末as+句子表达缘由的句型，大师就完全可以堆集起来，不要碰上缘由就统统写because...
3. 构成自己的写作框架
上面谈的辞汇跟句型实在都是属于写作的细节，写作除了细节重要外，加倍重要的是你的写作框架能否具有公道逻辑。
所以平常除了自己多写之外，记很多分析范文，构成一个自己的写作框架，比如我自己很喜好的一个大写作框架就是分析Simon的范文构成的
小我看法，仅供参考，你杠你对
开首段：引入题目布景+明白表达自己的概念
主体段（2段）：焦点论点-分论点（若有）-再展开论据-再反复焦点论点（我感觉没需要，看自己）
留意：论据一定是可以去支持你论点的，别瞎套模版
结尾段：照应开首段就行了，说白了，重申你的概念
请一定留意！！框架只是参考而已，小我有小我的爱好跟习惯！
最初自学党们，想要提升写作才能，除了堆集写作辞汇跟句型，多分析范文去构成自己的写作框架之外，还可以多参考高质量的免费公然课（主讲教员是曼切斯特大学说话学教授兼雅思前考官），间接进修巨细作文的写法，好用的句型等等，学会了以后，自己多练习，写作不练习是不会有进步的，有条件的话找专业人士给你批改一下，提升得会更快。
雅思备考并不轻易，特别是像写作这类主观性题目，很多黉舍申请的时辰还要看小分，就加倍恶心了，所以列位心态放好，该多写就多写，不要让写作拖你出分的后腿。
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雅思真题获得渠道及利用倡议：雅思真题材料在那里可以下载?
雅思真题获得渠道及利用倡议：雅思真题材料在那里可以下载?
雅思作文高分范文(篇三)

1. 剑桥雅思真题
剑桥真题集答案部分是有官方范文（MODEL ANSWER）跟门生写的文章（就是之类的，就是门生写的）
官方给到的范文是很是具有参考意义的，可以用来堆集辞汇等等，同时官方给门生打了分的文章，大师可以拿来跟自己写的停止对照，看看自己的水平在哪。
2. 前雅思考官Simon 整理的范文
先说说Simon是谁，Smon是雅思前资深考官，在中国地域担任过雅思考官，考官嘛，必定是很是领会雅思考试的备考技能跟评分标准的，加上在中国当过雅思考官，自然对列位在写作中的题目很清楚，也晓得高分范文需要的是什么，所以他的写作范文参考性极大极大极大！
小我感觉Simon的范文，文章不会用很多的高级辞汇跟长难句，概念表达很是清楚，而且是从概念落到细节都很是的自然，说得直白一点，就是看完就是感觉这小我写的工具有事理，压服力强。
我很是倡议冲击写作高分的朋友可以好好分析Simon的写作范文。
3. 顾家北手把手教你写雅思写作
这本书的话，我小我感觉比力合适小白去堆集范文中的好词好句，分清楚写作的话题，跟构建框架，可是我不是很倡议已经具有冲击写作高分根本的同学看这本书，怕你们看多了构成牢固的思维模版了。
自学党们留意了，除了以上提到的带范文的材料外，我倡议列位可以经过参考一些免费的公然课，私戳助教就能支付材料，获得已经整理好的写作范文，跟写作辞汇等等，记得找助教支付完整的材料包，里面还有剑桥雅思真题，口语题库等等，领到就是赚到，还节俭大笔时候在整理材料上面，别错过哦。
雅思作文高分范文(篇四)

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
lt is no doubt true that the majority of people would like tobe happy in their the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there do seem to besome common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness.
Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. Nobody can fully understand or experience another person's feelings, and we all have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure. Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success,whereas for others, health and family are much more important. At the same time, a range of other feelings, from excitement to peacefulness, may be associated with the idea of happiness, and the same person may therefore feel happy in a variety of different ways.
Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people would agree that there are some basic preconditions to achieving it. Firstly, it is hardfor a person to be happy if he or she does not have a safe place to live and enough food to eat. Our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant , the greatest joy in life is usually found in shared experiences with family and friends, and it is rare to find a person who is content to live in complete isolation. Other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose in life.
ln conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular to each individual, but l believe that our basic needs for shelter, food and company need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.
雅思作文高分范文(篇五)

The diagrams of the coastal area of Brightsea illustrate its development from a fishing community in 1950 to a ferry terminal, with plans for future development.
In 1950 the coastal zone of Brightsea was undeveloped with just a light house and lighthouse keeper's house. There was a jetty for fishing boats, and a few cottages.
Currently, it can be seen that certain developments have taken place. For example, roads have been constructed and there is an hotel near the lighthouse. A large wharf is now supporting a ferry service. A cafe and shop are catering for the daily needs of the community.
There are plans for Brightsea to experience further growth. The hotel is to be extended and a sailing club built alongside the hotel, to the south. A second ferry wharf will be added with a telecommunications antenna and the shop replaced by a supermarket and car park. In the northern part of Brightsea, a restaurant and apartments will be built to supersede the cafe.
In summary, the coast of Brightsea has changed from being a fishing community in 1950 and is expected to become a more signigicant ferry terminal. The lighthouse will have been the only constant landmark.
雅思作文高分范文(篇六)

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