雅思写作外教范文：制砖的进程（流程图类小作文，含音频）

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你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。明天，给大师带来一个雅思写作小作文的原创范文。   

老例子，以下是正文目录：     

1，题目
2，Mac范文
3，范文朗诵
4，范文剖析



上题：


You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

                                                  - Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗诵 -
                                                                    ▲范文音频戳这里▲

The diagram illustrates the method of brick production for the construction industry.
Overall, there are seven stages in the process, beginning with the digging up of clay and culminating in delivery.
To begin, the clay used to make bricks is extracted from the ground by a large mechanical digger. This clay is then set onto a metal grid, which is used to break up the clay into smaller pieces that fall onto a conveyor belt.  Following this, sand and water are added to the clay, with the mixture being turned into bricks by either inserting it into a mould or using a wire cutter. Next, these bricks are placed into an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours.
In the subsequent stage, the bricks go through a heating and cooling process, where they are heated in a kiln at a moderate temperature of 200°C to 980°C and then at a higher heat ranging from 870°C to 1300°C, followed by a cooling process in a chamber for 2 – 3 days. Finally, the bricks are packed and delivered to their destination.

- Essay Analysis 范文剖析 -

Standard Task 1 Phrases 雅思小作文地道表达堆集：

• The diagram illustrates
  
• the method of
  
• Overall,
  
• in the process
  
• beginning with
  
• To begin
  
• used to
  
• set onto
  
• fall onto
  
• following this,
  
• added to
  
• turned into
  
• by either
  
• inserting it into
  
• placed into
  
• In the subsequent stage,
  
• go through a ___ process
  
• ranging from
  
• packed
  
• delivered to their destination
  

Vocabulary 高分辞汇：

• construction industry 修建行业
  
• culminating in 竣事
  
• extracted from 从……中提取
  
• mechanical 机械的
  
• conveyor belt 传送带
  
• mixture 夹杂物
  
• inserting 插入；嵌入
  
• subsequent 随后的；以后的
  

Cohesion (C&C words and phrases) 把这些简单的词用好，能帮你在"联贯与跟尾"方面轻松拿分:

• Overall,
  
• , beginning with
  
• To begin,
  
• by
  
• this
  
• then
  
• , which is
  
• smaller
  
• that
  
• Following this,
  
• , with the
  
• by either
  
• next, these
  
• In the subsequent stage,
  
• , where they
  
• and then
  
• ranging from
  
• , followed by
  
• Finally,
  

原文地址：https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/591724752
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