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我的回答是——有谁愿意:宁可得低分 抄模板套范文；不得高分英语思维写英语呢？
相当一些大考生以为：宁愿得低分而不得高分。你也许会说我这是恶作剧吧，还真的不是恶作剧的。本文作者要问：“捉住模板英语的拯救稻草 门生真的是写英语作文得高分吗？”
英语作文究竟怎样写？大部分考生自豪地回答说：“抄模板套范文呗”。
究竟回答：判（阅）卷教员发现考生写作的是模板或范文作文（长像千胞胎万胞胎像模具刻出来的一样）那就降档次、扣分数，没商量。
不幸全国门生心呐；花大量时候背大量模板，大考判（阅）卷教员见了模板就降档次扣分数，没商量。这真的是无语。
门生获得成果：事倍功半甚至功零；得低低分呀！与其说根本欠好，背模板好，倒不如说背模板处理的是心理题目，不能处理得高分的题目，且不能成功处理现实写英语的才能题目。
究竟上说，越是英语根本欠好，就越不要背模板，由于越是尽力背模板，越是走入“死胡同”，其事理是：英语是逻辑说话，不是模板说话，逻辑是英语的灵魂。
“活胡同”能成功地帮助处理英语思维写英语＝以提醒点为中心，左找缘由，右找成果＝缘由←提醒点→成果，省时省力具有成活率，大考判（阅）卷教员便给升档次提分数。
所以说，英语不管高文文小作文，不是背的：而是用自己的逻辑思维写出来的。
英语作文不是靠背他人作文而写的，而是靠利用自己的逻辑思维的自力概念写出的。
为此倡议考生用英语思维写英语，可以参考英语逻辑思维的四种思维方式，即：①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果。其表达的最根基的形式是——以提醒概念句为中心，左找缘由，右找成果。这样一步一步推理写作英语作文——这样写英语作文就完全合适以英语为母语的人写作英语的标准了。如此说：不得高分都很难；不得高分才怪呢！
比如，1主题：“我爱进修英语”，2缘由：你要说出什么缘由促使你爱学英语：⑴、⑵、⑶…，3成果：还要说爱学英语有什么成果⑴、⑵、⑶…，4办法：你要说学好英语采纳的办法是什么？⑴、⑵、⑶…，这就是英语思维和逻辑婚配的具体内容。举一个现实例子以下：
1主题是“汤姆用中文表演节目感应兴奋”→Tom is excited about performance in Chinese.
2主题发生的缘由是“为进修中国社会现代文化常识”→He acquires the modern-culture knowledge about the society in China.
3主题发生的成果是“是以在他看来,完善地说中文是有帮助的”→, that finds it helpful for him to speak perfectly in Chinese.
4到达这类成果的办法是“这样能用中文在中国公司成长一种坦诚交换的文化”→,…successful to develop a culture of open communication with Chinese Company in Chinese.
上述1主题、2缘由、3成果和4办法的英语句子是怎样写出来的呢？请看以下说明：
1写主题句：利用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主 + 系+ 表 （表：描述词或动词+ ed 加 介词短语）→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延长句之一，即：→Tom is excited about performance in Chinese.→汤姆用中文表演节目感应兴奋。
2写缘由句：利用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主+谓+宾+介词短语→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延长句之一，即：→He acquires the modern-culture knowledge about the society in China.→他进修中国社会现代文化常识。
3写成果句：利用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主+谓+宾（=名/代词+ to 动词）→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延长句之一，即：→, that finds it helpful for him to speak perfectly in Chinese.→在他看来,完善地说中文是有帮助的。
4写办法句：利用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主+谓+宾（=名/代词+ to 动词）→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延长句之一的简单式，即：→,…successful to develop a culture of open communication with Chinese Company in Chinese.→这样能用中文在中国公司成长一种坦诚交换的文化。
上述主题、缘由、成果和办法的英语句子汇总以下：
Acquiring the modern-culture knowledge about the society in China, Tom is excited about performance in Chinese, that finds it helpful for him to speak perfectly in Chinese and successful to develop a culture of open communication with Chinese Company in Chinese.（为进修中国社会现代文化常识，汤姆用中文表演节目感应兴奋。是以在他看来,完善地说中文是有帮助的,这样能用中文在中国公司成长一种坦诚交换的文化。）
上述英语汇总文是按照一个提醒点所写的逻辑组句；假如还有提醒句则仍可写出别的的逻辑组句……
这类写英语作文的道理是——英语是逻辑说话，逻辑就是推理。类似写英语作文话题，如写“大门生当村官具有新的前途（Being Village Officials, A new Future）”为题内容的道理也是如此。具体写出英语文以下。
Graduating from universities, some students would be requested to be village’s officials, which are considered as being impractical, according to some people. That will go to waste on educational resources.
By comparison with this, these village officials are set in new future of university graduates, whose prospects for employment look bright. As seen from this, the job to be done in rural areas gave university graduates a practical chance to apply their the knowledge they had acquired at university.
This helps the rural areas with high-quality development to occur economically, enabling the at-all-level governments to seek the perfectly-creative solutions to problems faced by university graduates who are in life and at work during their stay in countryside.
They bring rural areas to improve in electrically-commercial management, financial and medical management and up-to-date education, etc. by putting their theory into practice. This proves immensely popular with farmers, turning rural areas favourable for making so much progress fully in all fields, in my belief.
完成上述英语作文，需要以下五个步调：
步调㈠说出主题：Being village officials is set in new future of university graduates, whose prospects for employment look bright.
步调㈡主题发生的缘由
The job to be done in rural areas gave university graduates the practical chance to apply their the knowledge they had acquired at university.
步调㈢主题发生的成果
This helps countryside with high-quality development to occur economically.
步调㈣到达这类成果应当采纳什么办法
The at-all-level governments are asked to seek the perfectly-creative solutions to problems university graduates faced in life and at work during their stay in countryside.
步调㈤展望未来，继续推理
They bring rural areas to improve in electrically-commercial management, financial and medical management and up-to-date education, etc. by putting their theory into practice. This proves immensely popular with farmers, turning rural areas favourable for making so much progress fully in all fields, in my belief.
上述五步调是落实英语为母语人写作英语道理的操纵方式。为此英语为母语的人利用逻辑思维四种方式写作英语，即：①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果。其表达的最根基的形式——以提醒概念句为中心，左找缘由，右找成果。这样一步一步推理写作英语作文——写出的英语作文就完全合适以英语为母语的人写作英语的标准了。这样写好（大考）英语作文，考生需要斟酌的思绪是——按照主题，由四个部分所组成以下：㈠说出主题；㈡主题发生的缘由；㈢主题发生的成果；㈣到达这类成果应当采纳什么办法；㈤未来展望继续推理，这五个题目论述清楚了，就OK便得高分了。
而得低分的“抄模板套范文”的写作者，则完全没有英语为母语人上述写作的科学标准的步调，很是“暴力地”抄模板句巨多，且英文词语表达中文思维，所以想起什么写什么，甚至利用英文不具有的“神散神不散”的中文思维，写一样以“大门生当村官具有新的前途（Being Village Officials, A new Future）”为题内容的模板英语文，所以抄模板考生背诵默写的模板句子都是无效的句子（例如：1These years这几年；2. different people have different opinions分歧的人有分歧的思惟；3.Here are some popular opinions以下是受接待的定见; 4. Just as a coin has two sides this situation is that, too.正如货币有两面性一样 5. Some people are happy to see that and they think… 一些人兴奋次看到并以为6.However, 可是7.some others have different thoughts about it.一些人分歧看法 8.The reason for their concept is that they think …其来由是他们以为9.they think that .他们以为 10.These concepts are …这些概念是11.But for me, 至于我，I think …我以为12.help the poor children in poor areas have the same opportunity… 帮助贫苦地域孩子有一样机遇13.This is my opinion. 这就是我的定见14.So, what is your opinion? 那末你的定见呢？15. Can you tell me?你能告诉我吗？不晓得模板考生究竟要表达什么意义？）
看出：考生花费了大量贵重时候背诵大量模板，底子没有论述出“大门生当村官具有新的前途”的思惟理论和理论内容，为此判阅卷教员见到“模板”就降档次扣分数没商量！这样考生获得的成果是：事倍功半，甚至功零；真是不幸全国门生心呐！
先看一看：稍微有用的大概喊口号的内容是：some students from famous colleges go to village to be village officials. it is a good way to help to improve the development of the villages and it can help improve the equality of different places. it is a waste of education.
后看一看：模板英语考生写出：具体大量模板+稍有用的或口号性质的英语作文的以下。
Being Village Officials, A new Future
These years there is an interesting situation that some students from famous colleges go to village to be village officials. To this situation, different people have different opinions. Here are some popular opinions.
Just as a coin has two sides this situation is that, too. Some people are happy to see that and they think it is a good way to help to improve the development of the villages and it can help improve the equality of different places.
However, some others have different thoughts about it. The reason for their concept is that they think it is a waste of education and they think that the college graduates can do something more meaningful instead of being village officials. These concepts are both reasonable and acceptable.
But for me, I think it is a good situation for society because it can help the poor children in poor areas have the same opportunity as the children in rich areas.This is my opinion. So, what is your opinion? Can you tell me?
总结：
获得高分的英语思维写英语的方式是：寻缘由，找成果，如此才分析题目透彻，请看以下讲授：英语思维的英语写作是由四个部分组成。
1说出主题；2主题发生的缘由；3主题发生的成果；4到达这类成果应当采纳什么办法，这四个题目论述清楚了，就OK了。其表达形式是“2缘由←1主题→3成果→4办法”。所以说——有谁愿意:宁可得低分 抄模板套范文；不得高分英语思维写英语呢？ |
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