英语写作得高分可以不背：海量“模板”和“范文”吗？

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文/刘宝彩/天津
为了印证题目得高分之概念，大考生先看以下第一篇英语作文，后看第二篇作文
第一篇英语作文
Acquiring the ancient- & modern-culture knowledge about the society in the Western countries, I enjoy learning English from an English teacher who helps me make great progress in listening accurately to, speaking clearly, reading perfectly and writing English logically.
This will find it possible for me both to be at work in the ABC city-based foreign-funded or joint-venture enterprise and go on a trip abroad, when having some difficulties solved helpfully by foreign friends with whom to communicate well in English, that is regarded as one of “tools”.
Its general-purpose use enables me conveniently to apply for my admission to the School of one of foreign universities as one of postgraduates taking a chemical-engineering course in 20 - -.
上述英语作文，整理出的中文意义以下（先有英文逻辑思维写作，后有中文）
为进修西方社会现代、现代文化常识，我喜好向英语教员进修英语如此帮助我在正确地听、清楚地说、完善地读和有逻辑性地写作英语方面，获得进步。是以有能够让我在这个城市的外资独资或中外合资企业工作，也有能够到国外旅游碰到困难与本国朋友用被视为一种“工具”的英语很好地相同获得帮助处理。这样利用这类多用处的“工具”让我便当地申请到国外大学留学专修化学工程课程。
从上述英语作文可以看出：
用英语逻辑思维买通英语写作思绪，不用背诵海量“模板”和“范文”，花费1-2小时了解和背诵——英语逻辑单句5种英语句式及其逻辑组合句之扩大句子。最初依照自己的思惟涵义，写作英语作文，完善跳出“模板和范文”禁锢，想怎样写就怎样写，而且还是原创英语作文极能够成为他人眼中的那篇范文。
如此让英语写作者便“有词儿写，有词儿晓得怎样写”，到达意义不反复，英说话表达有新意，大考判（阅）卷教员对此有吸引力给高分数，固然，没有模板“痕迹”，判卷教员不扣分，获得成功写作英语。英语作文如画伸展花绽放 源于逻辑推理走多远，思绪随之走多远!
是以据主题寻缘由找成果及其办法。要在内容及其表达形式、思维主、客观方面深入思考。英语作文的内容思惟便清楚了，概念之论据也清楚了包括究竟论据和理论论据。
所以考生自己独占的想法充实地表达出来靠的是：逻辑思维作推理根据就是——寻缘由找成果；逻辑思维四方式：①一因一果；②一因多果；③多因一果；④多因多果。其根基表达形式是：以概念为中心，左找缘由，右找成果。为印证这类“思维四方式及其根基形式”之可操纵性，再写作第二篇英语逻辑思维作文，其题目是——感悟：完善自我人生。
第二篇英语作文
I could make much progress on getting wide experience learned from daily life, through work or the relevant knowledge.
This achieves great success in my grown-up from unhappiness to happiness, of which I will be proud. Its fact comes to me that I have worked hard at acquiring knowledge about Math, Chinese, English, Physics, Chemistry or professionals , etc.
These could keep me in bright future by means of disappointment, or doubt or hesitation, as well as of amusement to help have the world view, outlook on life and value. That finds it possible for me to choose the correct path in practice, on which a very wide group of people were, who did something different to.
They forced me to pay every effort to advance at all time when troubles ended up, being a huge of source of self-confidence and something difficult to have to do, all, that shaped the life of me being one of new-type people.  
This needs to begin with hunting job difficultly, that regarded as stepping into society, enabling me to understand I had to make applying for jobs less painful. On its consideration, I had to deal with the pain-pleasure problem rationally, looking for best one of people whom to find being myself.
总结：
上述两篇英语作文可以帮助门生在英语作文写作中真正地了解：英语是逻辑思维说话，不是中文思维说话，逻辑是英语的灵魂。所以写英语要“不靠中文思维靠逻辑”之方式才能写好英语作文，如此考生写作英语作文成就提升得高分。
英语作文之所以不能用中文思维写，由于中文是发散思维，英文是逻辑思维。发散思维，就是平常说的，形散神不散，而英文没无形散神不散之说的。英语是型合意合的逻辑思维说话。所谓的型合意合，就是指表达出的英语既要合适英语句型，又要合适表达的意义。
上述两篇英语作文获得三点启迪：㈠促进了内容英语说话切确描写和理念清楚诠释，利用英语逻辑推理表达正确；㈡帮助门生在英语逻辑思维写作中，门生思惟处于推理的思考运转中；㈢这样大大地加速了“用英语思维写英语作文”的现实操纵，到达英语为母语人的写作标准而写出具有英语“味道浓浓的”英语作文。
是以实现：得高分！英语写作不用背：海量“模板”和“范文”

原文地址：https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/576868576
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