2022.12.3雅思高文文剖析及高分范文：天天看电视对孩子的 ...

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每周写作真题剖析—Sofia教员

2022年12月03日雅思高文文真题：
Some people think watching television every day is bad for children. Others think it is good for children to get knowledge. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人以为天天看电视对孩子欠好。其他人则以为孩子们获得常识是好事。会商两种概念并给出自己的概念。

一、题目剖析

首先这是一道discussion范例的题目，需要我们会商双方概念然后给出自己的看法，我们自己的看法可以支持A方、B方，大概A+B，大概分歧意A/B，有自己自力的看法。
看电视对于孩子们是利还是弊是一个须生常谈的题目，必定是黑白都有的，不能混为一谈。看电视可以拓宽视野，增加常识；可是电视节目中也常会有些暴力场景，这些场景对孩子们是会发生不良影响。
所以我们的看法是折衷，在监管适当的情况下，看电视是益处多多的。
接下来，我们随着Sofia教员一路看看高分范文吧~
二、高分范文

With the rapid development of science and technology, television, as a powerful invention in the 20th century, is becoming an indispensable tool in people's life. People can learn about what is happening around the world simultaneously by watching TV. Young individuals are unavoidably affected. In my point of view, if the government and the whole society can do their utmost to prohibit the unhealthy contents on TV and provide the children with a clean growing environment, then watching television is an excellent way for children to acquire various useful information.
On the one hand, some people argue that watching television every day is detrimental to children’s growth. In details, some youngsters will imitate the scenes and actions of violence and crimes in TV programs, thus becoming criminals. No one would ever deny the inclination and ability of the youth to imitate. Seeing such kind of shots, especially when they are exposed to too much of such scenes, they would think that these are commonplace things in real life. As they know little about the law, they won't be able to know that these are crime committing and hence, they will just copy what they see and eventually break the law. There are simply too many such kind of examples in our actual life that we can just save the trouble to list any here.


On the other hand, others believe it is beneficial for children to obtaining knowledge. Firstly, television is the most effective tool to inform children of the latest news and scientific development over the world. Television tells us the recent development of some researches, such as clone technology, genetic breakthroughs, the new computing technology and so on, which can stimulate the imagination of children and encourage them to carry out relevant experiments, making new findings and breakthroughs in their study. Secondly, some programs like adventures and geography can enlarge children's knowledge of scope. With the emergence of information technology, the knowledge in textbooks cannot satisfy children's curiosity any more. Children need to learn wider knowledge and know more about our world.
In conclusion, my view is that whether watching television every day is bad for children depends on guidance from parents and teachers as well as government regulation.


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