20230211雅思高文文范文分析-公司高层高薪资

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Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?


翻译：大型公司中，高级带领层的薪资应当比其他员工薪资高，你能否赞成
话题：社会类-工作
范例：赞成与否

题目分析

我们先铺垫一下布景
大师感觉，CEO的人为到底和普通员工的人为差出了几多？

来看看以下这张图，罗列了几至公司，大师可以稍作领会


（Source： http://business.org  https://www.business.org/finance/accounting/hourly-wages-ceo-vs-employees/)
以Microsoft和Amazon为例，CEO与普通员工的人为居然可以差出500-1000倍，差异实在客观
正由于此，很多人都以为 It is unfair that executives make substantially more than a middle manager, an executive assistant, or an assembly-line worker 由于这些其他员工做出的进献也是庞大的，没有他们的点滴履行，公司也没法一般运转
而且The wage gap between the common individual and the uncommonly overpaid CEO should anger workers. 大概最少会招致不满discontent
这类不满情感，能够会让普通岗位中的员工们对工作的支出度大大削减，而这对于公司的成长也是非常晦气的
那我们再来看看支持高层高薪的人概念为何；
从股东角度讲：Companies use high salaries to draw top talent in a competitive field or reward leaders who increase company value
CEO的工作内容触及到严重决议，成长偏向等 the job of CEO is extremely critical to the success of a company.
股东们自然是愿意花大代价去聘请experienced, proven, high-performing CEOs to run their companies.
好啦，铺垫这么多，我们来看看明天的范文吧，明天范文请大师重点关注作者论证的方式，一环扣一环 层层递进的论证若何誊写

范文分析

Many believe that executives at major companies are overpaid. In my opinion, this disconcerting wage gap is justified asthere are few individuals capable of fulfilling the role responsibilities.

开首段：作者亮相-赞成
适用句型：
sth. is justified as... 某事是公道的由于
eg. Governments' strict policy on punishing those who spread rumors is justified as rumors bring huge negtive effects to the society.

Critics of higher salaries for executives point out the unwarranted gap between them and other employees. For example,the average office worker or a cleaner （具编制子）works a similar amount of hours and, in some cases, the demanding nature of their job is arguably more strenuous (严重的，艰辛的）. Nonetheless, CEOs and other executives get paid in the tens of millions of dollars annually, and this occurs even if the company reports disappointing results or in periods of economic downturn, such as the recent global recession. Their salaries are so many times higher and it is impossible to rationalise the disparity by emphasising the hours worked alone. Therefore it is logical to decry the salaries of executives and identify corruption as a culprit.
主体1段：开首概念句清楚了然- 诠释举例部分请留意进修作者是若何层层递进及停止具体细节对照的
【含具体细节对照】
The average office worker or a cleaner works a similar amount of hours and, in some cases, the demanding nature of their job is arguably more strenuous . Nonetheless, CEOs and other executives get paid in the tens of millions of dollars annually, and this occurs even if the company reports disappointing results or in periods of economic downturn, such as the recent global recession.

在停止对照论证时，比起集约式对照，将对照双方具体化，经过人群具体化、描述词限制、数字、特别时候段限制等方式将例子双方具体描写的同时停止对照，会使对照论证更具有压服力，也是雅思写作钟爱的形式
适用单词：
1.Critics : 否决者； Critics of higher salaries for CEOs - CEOs高薪资的否决者
2. economic downturn: 经济低迷

However, in my opinion, the outsized salaries for executives are justified by supply and demand. It is an uncomfortable fact but true regardless that there is a large pool of potential applicants who would make serviceable replacements for the lowly paid positions. This is not true for executives generally and CEOs more specifically. A CEO must have a strong theoretical background (often based on attending an Ivy League institution), years of proven experience, tireless work ethic, uncommon leadership qualities, and exemplary understanding and insight into global economics. These abilities and characteristics are rare and , therefore, companies must compete to hire them by offering the greatest remuneration packages.
主体2段；我方概念- 仍然请小伙伴们关注作者层层递进论证的方式，写的很出色
【递进论证逻辑】
A是什么样的. This is not true for B. B是什么样的，for example，例子1, 例子2，例子3。 是以两者的差异可以论证...
In conclusion, though the salaries for executives appear extravagant, they are the result of a logical calculation of supply and demand. There are more important reforms needed within the free market capitalist model.
结尾段： 概念总结
适用单词：
appear-看起来，似乎是- 动词
eg.
There appears to be increasing support for this opinion.
似乎更多人起头支持这一概念



好了，以上是本次的真题范文分析，看完本文，你最少应当学会了...is justified as ... 及含细节的对照论证若何誊写
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祝大师都能拿CEO一样的高薪水
Cheers！
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