随着教员备考雅思写作（雅思写作45天备考计划-Day1）

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雅思写作45天备考计划，属于一个长更新的系列笔记，在这个系列笔记中，我会从雅思写作教员的角度，天天更新门生在备考雅思写作进程中需要处理的题目，以及响应题目标处理方式，是以雅思写作备考毫无眉目的初学者，大概考过成就不理想，有很多备考疑问的门生，都可以从这个系列笔记中有所收获
Day1
雅思写作备考进程中，很多门生总是5/5.5 很难到6，形成这个现象其中最首要的一个缘由就是英语表达才能太差，是以备考雅思写作首先要做的工作就是系统提升自己的英语表达才能，这样不但可以让自己获得满足的雅思成就，一样对今后的留门生活也有很大的帮助  
是以备考雅思写作的第一天，就需要自测一下自己的根本语法和辞汇水平，存在题目最好对应处理
（1）下面这些句子覆盖了门生在雅思写作进程中经常出错全数的语法点，可以自己试着看看能不能找出毛病的点，不能就代表自己这个地方也有题目（为了下降难度，已经把毛病范例停止了标志），答案在前面
冠词用法的毛病：
1.Employee can get more benefits from telecommuting than employer.
2.The teacher should respect students’ free time.
单词词性的毛病：
1.As far as I am concerned, this point of view is make sense.
2.The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.
3.Take care of pets can contribute to children’s physical and mental health.
4. I will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of study abroad.
5.As the rapid development of the national economy, the quality of our life has been great improved.
http://6.In order to lose weight, we should avoid to eat junk food.
7.The major task of students is do more writing exercises and master more testing skills.
8.The reason why reality shows are so popular is that they are really interested and amazed.
及物动词/不及物动词的题目
1.The system will mainly benefit from the local people.
2.Many experts disapproved this idea.
3.The accident was happened on June 28, 1980.
句子中出现过剩谓语动词的情况：
1.Those support the compulsory military service give their reasons as follows.
2.There are many people think that overseas study can cultivate students’ independence.
主从复合句的毛病：1.指导词的利用毛病2. 从句语序的题目
1.Many children are addicted to computer games will lead to some serious problems.
2.Despite the weather was bad, he went to the library.
3.The death penalty is necessary. Because it can reduce crimes and ensure the social order.
4.Many cars are parked along the street, that is the direct cause of traffic congestion.
5.Although the price of cars has increased a lot these years, but there are many people want to buy a car.
6.I don’t know how can we solve the rubbish problem.
7.It is advertising makes us buy something without consideration.
句子结构换乱/成份缺失的题目
http://1.In China has more than 20 million men who worry about their marriages.
2.There have a number of overseas students in the United States.
3.If you work hard will get a high grade in the test.
常见的流水句的毛病：
http://1.In general, the Internet helps us learn more things about the world, it plays an important role in the modern society
2.Teamwork is quite important, however, many people choose to work on their own.
主谓分歧的题目：
1. Public education in many areas are not possible due to the government budget.

参考答案+语法点剖析（假如存在上述题目，可以在这里找到答案）
冠词用法的毛病：
1. Employee can get more benefits from telecommuting than employer.
毛病分析：可数名词和冠词不分炊（假如名词是可数名词一定要留意利用什么冠词)
employee/employer --Employers/employees /an employee/ an employer
名词复数的形式在语法上属于zero article 泛指整体/ a/an泛指任何一个
2. The teacher should respect students’ free time.
毛病分析：定冠词乱用,the teacher-teachers/a teacher
雅思写作中除了必须用the 的特别情况（自行百度），一般定冠词在利用的时辰最最少这个名词要有限制.
The water in this lake is important for people in this village. (water 前面有限制，是以可以暗示特指所以能利用定冠词the)
单词词性的毛病：
1. As far as I am concerned, this point of view is make sense.
毛病分析：make sense-reasonable  make sense 意义是说得通/有事理 可是它是动词词组，不能充任表语（表语一般由：名词/描述词/动词不定式/动名词来充任）
2. The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.
毛病分析：instead of -replaced  谓语只能由动词充任 instead of 介词短语虽然有替换的意义，可是不能充任谓语
3. Take care of pets can contribute to children’s physical and mental health.
毛病分析：take-taking 主语的位置上不能出现动词真相，这个题目及其简单却很是普遍，一般这个时辰需要利用动名词
4.  I will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of study abroad.
毛病分析：study-studying 介词前面需要利用名词大概动名词
5. As the rapid development of the national economy, the quality of our life has been great improved.
毛病分析：great-greatly  副词修饰动词 描述词修饰名词  
6. In order to lose weight, we should avoid to eat junk food.
毛病分析：avoid to eat -avoid eating  一定留意动词的用法，留意那些动词前面可以跟doing 那些跟to do.
7. The major task of students is do more writing exercises and master more testing skills.
毛病分析：is do -is to do  当表语的位置上出现了行动的时辰，要按照具体的情况挑选to do/doing 的形式
8. The reason why reality shows are so popular is that they are really interested and amazed.
毛病分析：interested-interesting  amazed -amazing --留意这类次的区分，-ing 使人若何 -ed 人感遭到若何
及物动词/不及物动词的题目
1. The system will mainly benefit from the local people.
毛病分析：去掉from  benefit 做动词的时辰是及物动词 意义是让...获益/ 记忆单词的时辰一定要留意这个动词是及物还是不及物
2. Many experts disapproved this idea.
毛病分析：disapproved 前面+of 不及物动词不能间接跟宾语，需要跟上自己搭配的介词才能跟宾语
3. The accident was happened on June 28, 1980.
毛病分析：去掉was. 类似happen 这类不及物动词不能用在被动语态中
句子中出现过剩谓语动词的情况：
这类毛病是雅思写作中最高频的毛病这类情况一般的处置方式，按照句子表达的意义 1.去掉过剩的谓语动词2. 把这个谓语动词酿成非谓语动词 3.加上适当的指导词使其酿成从句中的谓语动词
1. Those support the compulsory military service give their reasons as follows.
毛病分析：support 和give 都是谓语动词，按照句子意义give 是主干结构中的动词，这个时辰 support -supporting /大概前面+who
2. There are many people think that overseas study can cultivate students’ independence.
毛病分析：去掉There are / 大概think -thinking/大概think 前面加who
主从复合句的毛病：1.指导词的利用毛病2. 从句语序的题目
1. Many children are addicted to computer games will lead to some serious problems.
毛病分析：will 前面加上,which 这是典型的非限制性的定语从句的用法 which 指代前面全部句子对前面句子的成果做出补充
2. Despite the weather was bad, he went to the library.
毛病分析：despite  -换成 although/even though 指导从句的时辰必须用毗连词despite/ in spite of 这两个单词可以暗示虽然的意义，可是词性是介词
3. The death penalty is necessary. Because it can reduce crimes and ensure the social order.
毛病分析：去掉because 前面的句号，把两个句子连在一路，这类毛病很常见一定要留意because 指导的从句必须凭借于前面的主句不能零丁成一个句子
4. Many cars are parked along the street, that is the direct cause of traffic congestion.
毛病分析：that-which 指导非限制性定语从句的时辰，只能用 which
5. Although the price of cars has increased a lot these years, but there are many people want to buy a car.
毛病分析：although /but 绝对不能同是出现
6. I don’t know how can we solve the rubbish problem.
毛病分析：how can we -how we can 特别疑问词指导的名词性从句中，从句中必须利用陈说语序
7. It is advertising makes us buy something without consideration.
毛病分析：makes 前面加that  It is +被夸大部分+that +句子其他成份 这个结构组成了英语中夸大句型，that 绝对不能省略
句子结构换乱/成份缺失的题目
1. In China has more than 20 million men who worry about their marriages.
毛病分析：典型的汉试英语，介词短语绝对不能充任主语 In China, there are more...
2. There have a number of overseas students in the United States.
毛病分析：典型的句子结构紊乱 There have -there are
3. If you work hard will get a high grade in the test.
毛病分析：will 前面加上you, 前面的主句中缺少主语，英语是结构化的说话，在表达的时辰必须优先保证句子结构的正确性
常见的流水句的毛病：
所谓的流水句就是一逗倒地的状态，这个毛病可以说是中国考生独占的题目/英语表达的时辰只要有一个完整的句子结构的内容就是一个句子，句子竣事必须用句号，假如需要和此外句子放在一路两个句子之间必须有公道的毗连词
1. In general, the Internet helps us learn more things about the world, it plays an important role in the modern society
毛病分析：两个句子之间应当加上毗连词so, 逗号不能毗连句子，这是典型的流水句
2.Teamwork is quite important, however, many people choose to work on their own.
毛病分析：however -but , however 有虽然的意义，可是它是副词，副词不能毗连两个句子，只要毗连词可以，这类题目很常见类似还有therefore/thus 这些次都只能表达响应的逻辑关系，可是不能连句子
主谓分歧的题目：
每次写句子的时辰都要想想自己的主语是谁，斟酌自己的谓语动词能否需要利用单三形式
1. Public education in many areas are not possible due to the government budget.
毛病分析：are -is 实在的主语是public education 笼统名词，所以谓语动词用第三人称单数形式
（2）根本辞汇自测
雅思写作追求分歧的分数，对辞汇的要求分歧，可是都有一个条件就是要正确性，辞汇是很多门生备考进程中最大的障碍之一，可是没此外法子，真想出分，就得对峙.
下面这些辞汇和词组是一些雅思写作表达思绪时辰经常利用到的一些高频辞汇，可以先试着看看认不熟悉，会不会写，用法知不晓得. (这个部分就不再供给答案了，不熟悉的可以自己查查字典，就当堆集了）
Afford to do sth/Agree to do sth/Decide to do sth/Determine to do sth
Expect to do sth/Manage to do sth/Learn to do sth
Prepare to do sth/Pretend to do sth/promise to do sth
Motivate/enable/ encourage/ invite sb to do sth
Educate/require/force/ allow/advise sb to do sth
Urge/ prompt/ persuade/anticipate sb to do sth
Empower/ tempt/ expect/ inspire/ permit sb to do sth
Enjoy/finish/ hate/keep/ imagine/ consider doing sth
Regret/ practice /experience doing sth
Discourage/ deter sb from doing sth
Explain sth. to sb
Inform sb. of sth
Provide sth. for sb/provide sb. with sth
Spend time/money (in) doing sth
Spend time/money on sth
Invest money in (doing) sth
Have/exert an effect/impact/influence on
Mitigate the effect/impact on sth
Take /adopt active/ effective measures to do sth  
Propose/put forward solutions to sth
Take actions to do sth
Have /gain an opportunity to do sth
Give/offer/provide an opportunity to do sth
Grasp an opportunity
Various factors
Cope with/withstand pressure/stress  
Suffer from pressure/stress
Lower the risk/cost
Make the best use of sth
Devote/dedicate oneself to sth/doing sth
Should/take /assume responsibility
Approve of
Benefit from
Concentrate on/focus on  
雅思写作45天备考计划的第一天（说话才能自测），上面供给的语法测试题，包括前面的剖析，根基可以处理大师备考进程中常碰到的语法题目，辞汇部分只是给出了一些常见的根本辞汇，只是想提醒大师，写作备考，辞汇语法仍然是重点....




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