雅思写作2022年12月24日 社会生活类（报告类）

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Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieving an ideal society?

Since the last few centuries, creating a perfect community has been a desire of many intellectuals, although they haven’t identified the character of an ideal society. This essay will discuss the crucial elements to build an ideal society as well as the ways to get it in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, the vital element to building an ideal community, the most important element is education. This element brings many benefits not only to an individual but also to the whole of mankind. For instance, educated members of society can think independently and they can remove social vices. Education can eradicate the practices of discrimination in society, and as a result, harmony and peace will build up in society, which is the most essential part of any perfect society. Moreover, health plays a vital role in the creation of a society. The healthy members of society are more productive; their energy and resources can be fully utilized for the development of society, instead of curing and defending the health-related problems of the members.

On the other hand, to achieve a perfect community these elements should be used by people effectively and efficiently. Educated people should provide their services to all segments of society. For example, the medical field, science, literature, and, many other fields need dedicated scholars to develop them. The culture and traditions should be wisely preserved by the people. Furthermore, healthy people in society can work effectively. Hence, to achieve an ideal society the citizens have to work together without any discrimination in any section of the industry.

In conclusion, the intellectuals should utilize the most important elements of the society such as education and health. The integrated efforts of people could achieve a dream of a perfect society.

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